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Observation's from Memory-PG
« Thread Started on Jun 29, 2005, 8:22pm »

(2) Character Musings: One of the characters reflecting on another character. Such as Salome thinking about Connor, Andrew thinking about Jamie, Oni thinking about Wes, Jamie thinking about Connor... Whatever you want.

Subject: Wesley Wyndam Pryce
Age: 33
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Oni stopped typing at that point. She closed her eyes wanting an accurate description of him for her log. She couldn't belieive she forgot to put him down. So she visualized him in her head, she used a memory to make the documentary. He was reading a book, no research. Just a random book. "Johnny Tremain" she believed it was. A human "Classic" as they call it.
His hair is very dark, yet still has tints of some brown in them. His skin is old, no real wrinkle's yet you could tell he has been through a lot. Scars...scars mark his skin everywhere. Some more subtle then other's but espeacially on his neck. A long one. Most likely from a sharp object, and he must of been in a great deal of pain as well. His fingers are long, and his hands are quite big. They are always warm. The term human's use are solarhands? Solarthermic? She would have to research it later. He has stubble for he refuse's to shave on occasion which make his appearence look much more darker then his personality is at times. Yet his eyes are very fascinating, they reminded Oni of the skin of a Bellaish demon. An beautiful demon, hence the name There skin, much like his eyes are a crystal like blue, yet his eye's have intense depth to them. Very intense depth, they make one's stomach go in complete 360 degree's which is very odd. Oni realize's now that no human's has ever done that to her. Does he possess some kind of strange magic? Is Vail possible still inside of him? His eyes make you feel like you've gone into a mixture of high and low air pressure or a torando as human's call them. Yet in her memory this is the part where he looks up from his book and looks at her oddly and Oni quickly looks down at her own papers. For some odd reason she suddenly felt extremely hot. Didn't Conner do something like this with Salome? Was she doing a human mating ritual and was unaware of it?
"Dark hair, blue eyes, scars" was all she typed in her lab top yet the real desctription will stay with her forever.

Authors Note: I came up with this in a total of 2 minute's. No really 2 minute's I checked the time I started and the time I finished. I saw the challenge, I typed, no editing, no nothing. Just some mindless fluff I thought up

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Re: Observation's from Memory-PG
« Reply #1 on Jun 29, 2005, 10:20pm »

Aww! So cute! And quite true to Oni's character! Don't hesitate to write again!

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Re: Observation's from Memory-PG
« Reply #2 on Jun 29, 2005, 11:22pm »

Well, no matter how much time you spent on it, this was good. I liked it.

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Re: Observation's from Memory-PG
« Reply #3 on Jun 30, 2005, 11:35am »

That was very nice. Short and sweet. I think you did a really good job capturing Oni's character. I'm glad to see something of Oni/Wes pop up. I really like them, but they've been neglected so far ficwise.

But here's a hint: Don't mention how long it took you to write in the future. When you say stuff like "it took me two minutes to write", people get the impression that you don't really care about the story. It's better to just post and leave it at that.

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