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Post by boywonder on May 30, 2006 17:18:29 GMT -5
Great job doing the story in prose instead of the teleplay format! Especially in the Battle of the Champions movie at the end where Jasmine is revealed as the mystery client. It would have been really difficult to hide Jasmine's identity until the end if it had been a real TV show or in teleplay format if the scene was left as-is since Jasmine's voice would have been easily recognizable. Plus, prose just reads better!
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Post by Emcee on May 31, 2006 3:22:53 GMT -5
I felt that putting the story in teleplay format made it feel "unfinished". Doing it as prose made it richer and easier to pretend that it was a television show being played out in text. If it were a teleplay, I felt something would be missing. It's just a personal preference. There are some people (such as Masq) who are very capable of pulling off the teleplay format. I didn't feel I was, not like this.
I'm glad you enjoy it.
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Post by Buffy8Fan on May 31, 2006 9:44:41 GMT -5
Some people can put it in script format and make it work. It wout tae too much of a rewrite. This way isn't bad though.
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